Deep dark eyes,
still, glum, soulless,
searching for hope,
to hold on to survive.
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Deep dark eyes,
still,glum, soulless,
traveling alone,
in the endless forest,
sees an angelic shadow,
floating behind a white light.
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Deep dark eyes,
still, glum, soulless,
submerges in radiance of the divine light ,
hears a sweet whisper,
keep walking,
you will survive.
~~~~~
Some more of my poems:
Being away from the world of words
Nice one!!! 🙂
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It is good to hear from you. Thank you for all your lovely comments. Made my day!
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lovely one dear! ❤ and as Michelle already said I liked that you ended it on a positive note 🙂
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Thanks a ton! 🙂
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Very nice poem Deepa. Loved it.
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Thank you Puneet!!!!
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Keep walking.such a beautiful, optimist and positive image weaved.
Awesome stuff, Baldeep:)
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Thanks Vishal!
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loved the sketch and the poem too. Filled me with positivity 🙂
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I did not do the sketch but thanks for liking the poem…:)
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Oh. But it’s beautiful.
🙂
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yes keep walking and soon the destination will be within sight…
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Absolutely right!! 🙂
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I loved how your poem ended with hope, ‘keep walking, you will survive.’
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Thank you. Glad you liked it!!
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